Razorirr
October 15th, 2005, 02:03 pm
(its not the greatest but ill get better hopefully... any criticism will be helpfull. thank you)
Prelude
The year is 9999. It is a crisis for all the alien races. The humans have once again jacked up big. This time finding a planet full of aliens that the galaxy has never seen before. They are the ruthless Mirlith Vui. Prepare yourself for the epic battles as enimies fight for control of the universe.
One: Katarn, a planet covered by a huge city.
Dalliance to Katarn Control, I need a flight path to the planet Buruni, said Jessica kindly. She had a run in with the nine to five traffic controller before.
Katarn control sending a flight path now, said Control as he mumbled something under his breath.
Thanks control Dalliance out.
Then time was nil as the ship hurtled for hyper-space at faster than light speeds. Since Jessica rated at the genius level in math and astronavigation she checked the coordinates to pass the time. She realized that there was not one but two mistakes in the numbers. She decided to play it safe and let the jump finish naturally. Most of her family died from the one way jump. Either into a sun or just never was able to get out of hyperspace.
When she did drop out of space all hell broke loose. She landed in the middle of a practice battle between two halves of a space navy comprised of ships that she had never seen before. She tried to run but was captured before she could even set in an emergency set of coordinates.
The aliens took her hostage and tortured her for three days. They finally were going to interrogate her.
I noticed that all of you are women, said Jessica.
isshi tib , commanded the lead female to an unseen female in the corner. He slammed a helmet on her head and she knew her language, We are the Mirlith Vui. Who are you stranger.
I am a human named Jessica. Why are you all women?
The women of our race are about 250 percent more intelligent than your race. And we are more intelligent than our males so we do the brainy things like, interrogations per say. said the Alien woman.
How do you know our species statistics like that.
Our torture is better than yours just like everything else that we make. It judges all aspects of a race not just endurance to pain. Oh, and by the way my name is Razorirr. Now tell me where did you come from, asked Razorirr.
I came from Katarn, a planet covered entirely by a huge uber-city.
Where did you come from!
0380-8912-0000"
Thank you, we needed to know that before we sent our ships out, said Razorirr
Ships, oh god what have I done, cried Jessica.
Yes, we want to make peace with the rest of the universe.
Really, I can be your interpreter. The rest of the universe wouldnt understand your language. Ill need the Dalliance so I can get them to not attack you. Oh and broadcast this if you beat me there, they wont let you land but they will let you stay in orbit, said Jessica as she handed them a data card with the security codes.
Lets get going then. If anything happens to go wrong we will always protect you and your family. We need to prep our world ship and then we can leave, said Razorirr.
***Katarn Space***
As the Dalliance dropped into realspace it started receiving calls from Katarn Control, This is Katarn Control, we have an unknown ship broadcasting that the Dalliance told it to come here. Is this true Dalliance?
Yes control, it is true. They have come to make peace with the rest of the galaxy, said Jessica.
Ok then, you and your friends have clearance for the senate corridor.
The flight in was uneventful. Then they had the senate meeting.
Why Madam should we let you into the Republic, asked Stevic, the senator from the Sploroian system.
si puablo nien, said Razorirr
Our living technology can help advance your economy and we need to spread out to other areas because our planets are vastly overcrowded, translated Jessica.
Then there was thirty four hours of debate before they came to a majority agreement.
We have agreed, said Stevic, To not let you into the Republic.
elegos grande zane , said Razorirr.
un swizlethrea, said Jessica, Then we have no choice to go to war with you and your Republic.
The shock of the statement went through the assembly hall like a wave.
Fine, we will let you into the republic, said Stevic.
Atevina Kui, translated Jessica to Razorirr.
Oot etla, replied Razorirr.
Too late, said Jessica as they were running out the door as Razorirr attacked with Mazapes.
Right behind Razorirr was Jessica saying how they needed to rescue their family. So they rescued Jessicas family while being protected by an air raid of living T-wings. They escaped and then started their attack on the galaxy.
Prelude
The year is 9999. It is a crisis for all the alien races. The humans have once again jacked up big. This time finding a planet full of aliens that the galaxy has never seen before. They are the ruthless Mirlith Vui. Prepare yourself for the epic battles as enimies fight for control of the universe.
One: Katarn, a planet covered by a huge city.
Dalliance to Katarn Control, I need a flight path to the planet Buruni, said Jessica kindly. She had a run in with the nine to five traffic controller before.
Katarn control sending a flight path now, said Control as he mumbled something under his breath.
Thanks control Dalliance out.
Then time was nil as the ship hurtled for hyper-space at faster than light speeds. Since Jessica rated at the genius level in math and astronavigation she checked the coordinates to pass the time. She realized that there was not one but two mistakes in the numbers. She decided to play it safe and let the jump finish naturally. Most of her family died from the one way jump. Either into a sun or just never was able to get out of hyperspace.
When she did drop out of space all hell broke loose. She landed in the middle of a practice battle between two halves of a space navy comprised of ships that she had never seen before. She tried to run but was captured before she could even set in an emergency set of coordinates.
The aliens took her hostage and tortured her for three days. They finally were going to interrogate her.
I noticed that all of you are women, said Jessica.
isshi tib , commanded the lead female to an unseen female in the corner. He slammed a helmet on her head and she knew her language, We are the Mirlith Vui. Who are you stranger.
I am a human named Jessica. Why are you all women?
The women of our race are about 250 percent more intelligent than your race. And we are more intelligent than our males so we do the brainy things like, interrogations per say. said the Alien woman.
How do you know our species statistics like that.
Our torture is better than yours just like everything else that we make. It judges all aspects of a race not just endurance to pain. Oh, and by the way my name is Razorirr. Now tell me where did you come from, asked Razorirr.
I came from Katarn, a planet covered entirely by a huge uber-city.
Where did you come from!
0380-8912-0000"
Thank you, we needed to know that before we sent our ships out, said Razorirr
Ships, oh god what have I done, cried Jessica.
Yes, we want to make peace with the rest of the universe.
Really, I can be your interpreter. The rest of the universe wouldnt understand your language. Ill need the Dalliance so I can get them to not attack you. Oh and broadcast this if you beat me there, they wont let you land but they will let you stay in orbit, said Jessica as she handed them a data card with the security codes.
Lets get going then. If anything happens to go wrong we will always protect you and your family. We need to prep our world ship and then we can leave, said Razorirr.
***Katarn Space***
As the Dalliance dropped into realspace it started receiving calls from Katarn Control, This is Katarn Control, we have an unknown ship broadcasting that the Dalliance told it to come here. Is this true Dalliance?
Yes control, it is true. They have come to make peace with the rest of the galaxy, said Jessica.
Ok then, you and your friends have clearance for the senate corridor.
The flight in was uneventful. Then they had the senate meeting.
Why Madam should we let you into the Republic, asked Stevic, the senator from the Sploroian system.
si puablo nien, said Razorirr
Our living technology can help advance your economy and we need to spread out to other areas because our planets are vastly overcrowded, translated Jessica.
Then there was thirty four hours of debate before they came to a majority agreement.
We have agreed, said Stevic, To not let you into the Republic.
elegos grande zane , said Razorirr.
un swizlethrea, said Jessica, Then we have no choice to go to war with you and your Republic.
The shock of the statement went through the assembly hall like a wave.
Fine, we will let you into the republic, said Stevic.
Atevina Kui, translated Jessica to Razorirr.
Oot etla, replied Razorirr.
Too late, said Jessica as they were running out the door as Razorirr attacked with Mazapes.
Right behind Razorirr was Jessica saying how they needed to rescue their family. So they rescued Jessicas family while being protected by an air raid of living T-wings. They escaped and then started their attack on the galaxy.